Interpreter — Poem analysis

I read the body’s discourse in every creature

though a wise man would not unnecessarily bark or caw

I answer the melancholy call of a swan

the void turning into despair in my stomach

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Understanding another creature, Dave Bonta suggests in "Interpreter," is never a neutral act. The poem is only eight lines long, yet it moves from a confident boast of expertise to an admission of what that expertise costs. The speaker claims to "read the body's discourse / in every creature." The word "discourse" is deliberately grand. It belongs to lectures and debates, and here it is applied to posture, gesture and cry, as if an animal's body were saying something as structured as a speech. "Every" is a sweeping word too, and since humans are creatures, it may quietly include us. The poem doesn't say, so that reading is an inference, but the ambiguity widens the claim.

The second stanza turns unexpectedly funny. "A wise man would not unnecessarily / bark or caw." The long adverb "unnecessarily" hangs at the end of its line, stiff and almost pompous, and then the next line drops into two blunt, comic monosyllables. The joke is on propriety: wisdom means not imitating animals. But the word "unnecessarily" leaves a loophole, because it implies that barking or cawing is sometimes necessary. The speaker, notably, says nothing about being wise himself. He is setting up an exception.

The exception arrives in the third stanza: "I answer the melancholy / call of a swan." The line break leaves "melancholy" alone at the end of its line, and its soft, liquid sounds (m, l, n, l) are a deliberate contrast to the hard "bark" and "caw." Notice also that the swan's call is already described as melancholy. That is the interpreter's own reading, delivered as fact, which is what makes him an interpreter and not just a listener. The poem doesn't tell us whether he answers aloud or in some other way. Some readers may hear an echo of the old folk belief in the swan's dying song, though the poem never mentions it.

The last stanza is the strangest: "the void turning into despair / in my stomach." There is no verb, only a fragment with a participle, "turning," which makes the change feel ongoing. It is also unclear whose void this is. It might be the swan's, the speaker's, or something the two now share. What is clear is the direction of travel. The stanza begins with two abstractions, "void" and "despair," and ends on "stomach," the most physical word in the poem. Having read the body's discourse in others, the speaker finds that his own body is now speaking. A stomach is also a place of hunger and hollowness, so the emptiness feels literal as well as emotional. Translating a cry, the poem implies, means letting it pass through you.

The form supports this quietly. The poem is four unrhymed couplets with no end punctuation, and the only capital letter is the "I" that opens it. Without a full stop, the despair is never closed off. The tidy two-line frames create a sense of control, which makes the feeling inside them seem harder to contain. Subtle sound echoes hold the stanzas together. The hard c of "creature," "caw" and "call" runs from the first stanza to the third, and "discourse" and "despair" share an opening sound and sit at the start and end of the poem. The first is a cool, intellectual word and the last a raw one, so that small echo traces the poem's whole journey from analysis to anguish.

The poem is significant because it complicates a comfortable idea. We often praise empathy as warm and enlarging, but Bonta shows its price: to understand a creature's sorrow you must take some of it in. The wise man's restraint, which looks sensible at first, starts to seem like a way of staying safe. At the same time, the poem is light on its feet. It lets a joke about barking sit beside a feeling of emptiness without explaining either. In a handful of plain words it asks what we owe to the cries we have learned to understand.

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