Dating game — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

a mouth on you like a clock at a bad dinner

tell me pretty stories about arson

preach to me a sermon on holy war

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Dave Bonta's short poem reads like a small, sharp portrait of a date gone wrong, or at least a date that feels dangerous. The opening image is the strangest: a mouth "like a clock at a bad dinner." Anyone who has sat through an awkward meal knows how slowly time moves, and how loudly a clock seems to tick. The mouth becomes something that measures out the discomfort, endlessly talking or endlessly noticed.

Then the speaker issues two odd commands: tell me "pretty stories about arson," preach me "a sermon on holy war." Both pair something beautiful or sacred with destruction. The speaker seems to want to be entertained, even seduced, by something violent, and maybe is being sarcastic about it. The tone feels dry, daring, and a little bored, as if flirtation has turned into a contest. The mood is tense and darkly playful, with the title's "game" hinting that none of it is quite sincere.

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