Red letters — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

Dear Dana,

I climbed the ridge to look for a poem & came back with supper instead: five pounds of chicken mushroom, freshly sprouted from the end of a log & dripping with moisture.

A couple of rove beetles scrambled in & out of fissures as I began breaking off hand-sized fans & nestling the boneless yellow flesh in a shopping bag. In this supermarket,

the shelves themselves are edible. Red letters on the bag said THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU Have a Nice Day.

Looking in at the bright crop, I felt as if I’d raided the crayoned worlds of first graders & lifted the sun from the top left corner of every drawing. I left a little behind for the beetles.

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The speaker sets out to find a poem and comes home with dinner instead, and the poem quietly suggests the two are not so different. Written as a short letter to someone named Dana, it describes a walk up a ridge, where a log is covered in chicken mushroom, a bright yellow fungus. The speaker fills a shopping bag with it, watched by a couple of beetles.

The best moment is the joke about the supermarket: here the shelves themselves are edible, and the bag even carries its own printed "THANK YOU" and "Have a Nice Day." The woods become a store that gives freely, and the thanks feel almost real.

The mood is warm, playful and grateful. The closing image, in which the mushrooms look like suns lifted from children's drawings, shows wonder and a little guilt. Leaving some behind for the beetles feels like a small, polite gesture of thanks in return.

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