Location, location, location — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

You Are Here, says the sign, & a red arrow indicates a dot. This is the familiar dot from the letter i, from the hole in the paper where the compass pirouetted, from the spots on your retina where the sun returned your gaze. The arrow never quite touches it — not because it’s too small or too far away, but because it’s too likely to spill. You are here… & you, & you, & you, & you, & you: the possibilites are both endless & predictable. It’s a whole note, freed from the five-line staff to sing its monotone song of yourself for as long as you’ll listen, thinking it’s just you, thinking you’re all alone on this head of a pin.

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Most of us glance at a "You Are Here" sign for two seconds and walk on. Dave Bonta keeps looking until the red dot starts to behave like a small, strange planet. His poem begins with the plainest facts, a sign, an arrow and a dot, and ends somewhere more unsettling: a doubt about whether anyone is as singular as they feel. The title borrows the estate agent's chant "location, location, location", and the joke is that a location tells you so little about a self.

The first half works by piling up what the dot could be. It is the dot of the letter *i*, the hole left where a compass pivoted, the bright blotch on your retina after you've glanced at the sun. These are three different kinds of mark: written, drawn and seen. Each carries a small story. The compass "pirouetted", a dancer's word for a tool that circles around a fixed point, so the dot becomes the still centre of a turning world. The retina image is odder. When the sun "returned / your gaze", looking becomes a staring contest you lose, and what you carry away is the sun's own dot. A mark on a map starts to feel as if it is looking back at you.

Then comes the poem's best surprise. The arrow never touches the dot, "not because it's too small / or too far away, but / because it's too likely / to spill." We expect geometry and get liquid. A dot that might spill is a drop, a vessel holding something, whether ink or a person. The line break after "but" holds the explanation back for a beat, and the word "spill" lands with a small shock.

At this point the sign starts speaking to everyone. "You are here… & you, & you, & you" has the ellipsis of a pause and then the stutter of a crowd filing past. The next phrase, "endless / & predictable", compresses the paradox of the poem. Every visitor is a new case, yet the pattern never changes. The ampersand, used throughout in place of "and", gives the writing a scribbled, stacking quality, like a list that could run on indefinitely.

The ending turns the dot into music. A whole note is a hollow oval, the longest note in common notation, here "freed / from the five-line staff". There is a quiet irony in this, because the staff fixes notes in place much as the sign fixes you. The "monotone / song of yourself" nods to Whitman's *Song of Myself*, but it shrinks that great chorus to a single sustained pitch. The dot sings "for as long as you'll listen", and since the dot is you, the listener is also the singer. The last image shrinks the scale again: "this head / of a pin". The idea of dancing on a pin recalls the old joke about angels, and it picks up the earlier "pirouetted". The dot is "thinking it's just you, / thinking you're all alone", and we have just watched a whole line of "you"s crowd onto the same spot.

The form suits this. The poem is free verse with no rhyme and no stanza breaks. Its short lines, mostly two to five words, act as breaths, and the sentences run across them, so that "where / the compass" and "freed / from" hang on the line ending before resolving. Because there is no pause for a stanza gap, the poem feels like one held note, which is what its final image describes.

What makes the poem worth reading is its method more than its message. It starts from the least poetic object imaginable, public signage, and lets curiosity carry it from punctuation to optics to music to philosophy. It is funny without being dismissive, and its loneliness is shared. The poem says that feeling like the centre of the map is the most common thing about us, and it says so lightly enough that you may find yourself reading the next shopping-centre directory a little differently.

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