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Dave BontaContemplative

You Are Here, says the sign, & a red arrow indicates a dot. This is the familiar dot from the letter i, from the hole in the paper where the compass pirouetted, from the spots on your retina where the sun returned your gaze. The arrow never quite touches it — not because it’s too small or too far away, but because it’s too likely to spill. You are here… & you, & you, & you, & you, & you: the possibilites are both endless & predictable. It’s a whole note, freed from the five-line staff to sing its monotone song of yourself for as long as you’ll listen, thinking it’s just you, thinking you’re all alone on this head of a pin.

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Start with a "You Are Here" map, the kind you find in a mall or park. The speaker looks hard at the red arrow and the tiny dot it points to, and that small mark starts to grow. It becomes the dot on an i, the hole a compass leaves in paper, the bright spot the sun burns into your eyes. The arrow never quite touches it, the speaker says, because the dot is "too likely to spill," as if it holds more than a single place.

Then the poem turns. Everyone who stands at the sign sees the same message, so "you" becomes "you, & you, & you." The mood is gently amused, with a thoughtful edge. The last image, a whole note singing its "monotone song of yourself," suggests that each of us believes we're the center of things. The closing picture of "this head of a pin" makes that feeling both funny and a little humbling: we're all alone together, each on the same tiny point.

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