Split — Poem analysis

Dave BontaAnxious

Two garden seats, side by side: one is full of leaves & the other, twigs. It looks like an amicable division. A spam comment touts Extraordinarily naked people. I hear a train whistle & remember the beast that stalked me in all my childhood dreams.

Up in the attic, a freshly shed snake skin is stretched across the pink fiberglass. Such separations must be wrenching, however necessary. A bluebottle fly clings to the top of an empty water jug, immobile from the cold. It’s a bad time of year not to be warm-blooded.

I eventually figured out that I was simply in the train’s way, & if I laid down & flattened myself against the ties it would thunder harmlessly overhead. Perhaps those nudists too have mastered the art of getting out of the way, & their bodies are not merely unclothed but transparent, so that you can see the food dissolving in their stomachs & ideas growing in the reptilian coils of their brains. There are protocols for everything, even in the garden. The wind is a very particular host.

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Dave Bonta's "Split" begins with a joke about housekeeping and ends somewhere much stranger. Its title keeps changing meaning as we read. First it's the pair of garden seats, one piled with leaves and one with twigs, a division the speaker calls "amicable," as if the furniture had gone through a polite divorce. Then it's the snake skin shed in the attic, and finally the split between a frightened child and the adult who has worked out how to survive the thing that scared him.

The poem is written in free verse, with no rhyme and no fixed metre. Its stanzas run seven lines, seven lines, then twelve, so the last section swells like a thought that won't stop. The rhythm is that of casual speech, helped along by ampersands and by enjambments that spill a sentence over the line break ("remember / the beast that stalked me in all / my childhood dreams"). The tone is dry and conversational, which lets the speaker slip from the trivial to the unsettling without raising his voice. A spam comment advertising "Extraordinarily naked people" sits beside a train whistle and a childhood nightmare, and the flat delivery makes the collision funny and eerie at once. Judging by that detail, the speaker is at a screen as well as in a garden, and the poem treats junk mail as something that might carry a message.

The central idea is that safety comes from yielding rather than fighting. In the third stanza the speaker explains how he beat his recurring nightmare. He "figured out that I was simply / in the train's way," and that if he lay flat against the ties, the train "would thunder harmlessly overhead." The beast stops being a monster and becomes a piece of traffic. The solution is not courage but a kind of humility, a willingness to make oneself small and let a larger force pass. The line "the art of getting out of the way" turns that into a skill, almost a craft.

The imagery gathers around skin, blood and exposure. The snake's "freshly shed" skin, stretched over pink fiberglass, is a ghost of a body, and the speaker's comment that "such separations must be wrenching, however necessary" sounds like it is about more than reptiles. The bluebottle fly, "immobile / from the cold," shows the opposite problem, a creature stuck in its body with no way to adapt. "It's a bad time of year / not to be warm-blooded" is a wry understatement, with a note of private relief in it. Then the nudists arrive, and the speaker imagines them as not merely unclothed "but transparent," with food "dissolving in their stomachs & ideas growing / in the reptilian coils of their brains." The word "reptilian" links back to the snake and also to the oldest, most fearful part of the brain, where nightmares might live. The nudists have gone further than the snake: they have shed the skin entirely, and nothing is hidden. Perhaps that is the poem's version of mastering fear. If you are fully exposed, there is nothing left to be stalked.

The ending changes direction again. "There are protocols for everything, even in the garden" has the stiff sound of an official notice, which fits the idea of rules and etiquette. Then comes the last line, "The wind is a very particular host." It is a strange, memorable image, and it can be read in a few ways. As an inference, the wind may be what sorted the leaves and twigs onto separate seats at the start, which would make the opening "amicable division" a host's careful seating plan. If so, the poem circles back on itself. The natural world has its own etiquette, and we survive by learning it rather than resisting it.

What makes "Split" worth reading is how much it holds without announcing a moral. It joins a childhood terror, an insect, a snake skin and a piece of internet spam, and lets them argue gently with one another. By the end, the reader may feel that being in the way is a problem we can solve, and that the odd, unclothed, transparent way of living might be the wisest.

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