Split — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

Two garden seats, side by side: one is full of leaves & the other, twigs. It looks like an amicable division. A spam comment touts Extraordinarily naked people. I hear a train whistle & remember the beast that stalked me in all my childhood dreams.

Up in the attic, a freshly shed snake skin is stretched across the pink fiberglass. Such separations must be wrenching, however necessary. A bluebottle fly clings to the top of an empty water jug, immobile from the cold. It’s a bad time of year not to be warm-blooded.

I eventually figured out that I was simply in the train’s way, & if I laid down & flattened myself against the ties it would thunder harmlessly overhead. Perhaps those nudists too have mastered the art of getting out of the way, & their bodies are not merely unclothed but transparent, so that you can see the food dissolving in their stomachs & ideas growing in the reptilian coils of their brains. There are protocols for everything, even in the garden. The wind is a very particular host.

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The speaker sits in a garden on a cold day and lets small observations drift into one another: two seats filled with leaves and twigs, a strange spam comment about naked people, a train whistle. The whistle pulls up a childhood memory of a beast in recurring dreams, which the speaker later understands as a simple matter of standing in the train's way. The fix was to lie flat and let it pass overhead.

That idea of yielding runs through the whole poem. A shed snake skin and a numb fly in the cold suggest that change and survival are hard, even when necessary. The nudists become a playful image of people who have mastered stepping aside, so open that their thoughts and digestion show. The mood is quiet, wry and gently reflective. The speaker seems to find calm in accepting that nature, like the wind, sets its own terms, and we do best to adapt.

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