A hollow hemlock — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

A hollow hemlock: peering out is more fun than peering in.

I start looking for a kite string — the motionless vulture.

Thursday’s hurricane sings softly in my screen door.

The house he grew up in long vanished, he brings a lawn chair.

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Four short scenes, each built from something small and observed. In the first, the speaker finds a hollow hemlock and decides that looking out from inside it is better than looking in. That sets up a playful, curious tone. Then the speaker scans the sky and mistakes a motionless vulture for a kite on a string, a gentle joke about how easily we see what we expect to see. The third scene is quieter still: the leftover wind of a hurricane hums in a screen door, as if the storm has shrunk to a whisper.

The last image shifts the mood. A man brings a lawn chair to the place where his childhood home once stood, though the house is long gone. The poem doesn't say what he feels, and that restraint is what makes it touching. The chair suggests he wants to sit with his memories. Overall the poem feels calm, attentive, and a little wistful, finding quiet meaning in ordinary things.

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