New Year round — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

first sunrise of the year the orange bellies of the clouds are blurry with snow

a gray squirrel in estrus trailed by two slow-motion suitors

in the wind above the ridge a raven croaks & somersaults

my first piss of the New Year I’m especially careful

distant rumble of a military jet it’s still the same world

windows rattle with the snoring of a late-night reveler

I clear the cookies from my hard drive avatar’s a question mark now

the grimy washing machine rocks with a load of laundry

first sunrise of the year the orange bellies of the clouds are blurry with snow

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The New Year arrives in Dave Bonta's poem without fanfare: no fireworks, no countdown, just snow smudging a sunrise. The speaker moves through a morning of small observations and chores, and the poem never announces a theme. Its central idea builds quietly from the pile-up of details. A new year is a date humans agree on, and the world carries on regardless. Whatever renewal there is has to be found in attention and in modest, slightly comic acts.

The title helps here. A "round" suggests a song whose voices circle back, and the poem is built the same way. It ends by repeating its opening stanza word for word: "first sunrise of the year / the orange bellies of the clouds / are blurry with snow." The words are the same, but we read them differently the second time. After the squirrel, the raven, the jet and the laundry, the image feels earned rather than merely pretty. We have lived through a morning inside it. "Round" may also hint at a round of chores, since the second half is full of domestic tasks, though that is an inference from the text.

The opening image sets the tone. Clouds with "bellies" are already animal, and the squirrel and raven that follow seem to grow out of that choice. The sky is "blurry," which fits a poem more interested in softness and uncertainty than in sharp resolutions. The squirrel is "in estrus," trailed by "two slow-motion suitors." The line break after "trailed" makes the suitors hang behind, as if the line itself were following. Nature in this poem ignores the calendar entirely and gets on with desire, play and pursuit. The raven that "croaks & somersaults" does the same. The ampersand keeps things casual and quick, and "somersaults" is a surprisingly joyful verb for such a dark bird.

Human life enters more sheepishly. "My first piss of the New Year / I'm especially careful" deflates the whole tradition of solemn resolutions. The speaker's version of a fresh start is not spilling anything. Then the poem darkens a little: "distant rumble / of a military jet / it's still the same world." The line has no punctuation and could be read as relief, resignation, or both. The jet is the only hint of violence in the poem, and the speaker refuses to dramatize it. Its rumble is answered by the next stanza, where "windows rattle with the snoring / of a late-night reveler." Celebration ends up as noise, as loud in its way as the machinery of war, and both belong to the same untidy world.

The last stretch turns renewal into housekeeping. "I clear the cookies / from my hard drive / avatar's a question mark now" is the cleverest moment. Wiping digital traces is a modern version of a clean slate, and the result is an identity reduced to a question mark. That works as a joke about default profile icons, and it also describes the speaker at the start of a year, open and undecided. Then comes the "grimy washing machine" that "rocks with a load of laundry." Even the cleaning equipment is dirty, which is honest and funny. The verbs "rumble," "rattle" and "rocks" create a quiet chain of sound across the poem, linking the sky, the house and the machine.

Structurally, the poem is free verse with no rhyme and a speech-like rhythm. The stanzas alternate in length: three lines, then two, and so on, beginning and ending on three. This gives a gentle pulse, like a walk or a rocking washing machine. The short, image-led stanzas recall haiku, each catching one moment, though the poem does not follow a strict syllable count.

Its significance lies in this mix of tenderness and wit. It treats the New Year as neither a miracle nor a sham. The poem suggests that starting again may simply mean noticing the clouds, staying careful, and putting on a wash.

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