New Year round — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

first sunrise of the year the orange bellies of the clouds are blurry with snow

a gray squirrel in estrus trailed by two slow-motion suitors

in the wind above the ridge a raven croaks & somersaults

my first piss of the New Year I’m especially careful

distant rumble of a military jet it’s still the same world

windows rattle with the snoring of a late-night reveler

I clear the cookies from my hard drive avatar’s a question mark now

the grimy washing machine rocks with a load of laundry

first sunrise of the year the orange bellies of the clouds are blurry with snow

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Dave Bonta strings together small snapshots of a single New Year's Day, and the poem's charm is that almost nothing "important" happens. A sunrise with snow-blurred clouds, a squirrel being chased by suitors, a raven tumbling in the wind, a bit of laundry: the day is made of ordinary moments, noticed with dry humor and real attention.

The speaker seems relaxed, a little wry, and quietly reflective. The joke about being "especially careful" on the first piss of the year pokes fun at New Year superstition and resolutions. The military jet's rumble brings in the wider world, but the speaker's shrug, "it's still the same world," suggests that a calendar change doesn't alter much. Clearing the cookies from the computer, leaving the avatar a question mark, hints at a fresh start that is small and a bit uncertain.

Repeating the opening three lines at the end makes the poem circle back on itself, like the year. The mood is gentle, observant, and content with the everyday.

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