Indies — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

where an island is things fire up jade and bold laughing with us at us

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Dave Bonta's "Indies" is only five short lines, and it works more like a glimpse than a story. It begins by placing us somewhere: "where an island is." Then things start to happen. The next line, "things fire up," suggests sudden energy, as if the place switches on once we arrive. "Jade and bold" gives us color and attitude in a few words. Jade makes me think of green water or foliage, though the poem never says so outright.

The most interesting move comes at the end. The island is "laughing with us / at us." That small shift changes the feeling. The laughter is friendly, but it also has a bit of teasing in it, as though the place is more alive and self-assured than the visitors. The speaker seems delighted rather than offended, someone happy to be part of the joke. The mood is bright, playful and a little humbling, like being welcomed by somewhere that knows exactly how charming it is.

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