Over and Done — Poem analysis

I wish I could turn back time to before it all went wrong or to that time when I felt the ashes burning under my feet as I walked through hell

When I was trying to climb the stairs to heaven feeling the urge to see you once more

For I am only Frankenstein a monster created by man my past has made me who I am today not the nice person you see before you but the child of Dracula as some could say

You may wipe off my tears but you will never understand you may try to protect me but when you see my real self you will kill me once more just like you have before the fire from hell has burned me back to life now I walk on this filth of the earth again

The flames from underneath are still inside me the ice from above is struggling to take over I want it to but when I get good news the happiness gets burned

It seems so clear behind the wall but such a fear I cannot call I bleed when I cry not because of cutting but because I try to rip out my heart so that I could just forget So I could start over So I could turn back time

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Nothing in "Over and Done" is actually over. The title promises a closed chapter, yet the poem ends where it began, with a speaker longing to "turn back time." That loop is the key to its meaning. Dominic Black gives us someone trapped inside a painful past, so worn down by it that the only fantasy left is erasure.

The opening sets out the poem's moral geography. Below is hell, with "ashes burning under my feet." Above is heaven, up stairs the speaker is "trying to climb," driven by "the urge to see you once more." The poem never says who "you" is or what went wrong, and the vagueness helps it. We are given the weight of regret rather than the facts behind it, so any reader can fill the gap with their own loss.

The second stanza supplies the central image: "I am only Frankenstein / a monster created by man." The speaker uses the popular shorthand in which Frankenstein is the creature rather than its maker. What matters is the logic of the comparison. A monster is made, not born, and the speaker says the same of themselves: "my past has made me who I am today." Dracula adds a second layer. A vampire hides behind a charming face, and the speaker likewise insists they are "not the nice person you see before you." Both figures are feared and hunted once the mask slips, which explains the bleak prediction that "you will kill me once more."

That word "once" matters. Death and resurrection run through the poem. The speaker has been "burned back to life" and now walks "on this filth of the earth again," like a revenant who came back without wanting to. Being alive is presented as the aftermath of something already finished, which gives the title its dark irony.

The kindness of the "you" is acknowledged but refused. "You may wipe off my tears," "you may try to protect me": each concession ends in a "but" or a grim forecast. The speaker seems to believe that being truly seen leads to rejection, so comfort cannot reach them.

The fourth stanza turns to fire and ice. "The flames from underneath are still inside me / the ice from above is struggling to take over." Then comes the unsettling line "I want it to." Judging by the imagery, fire stands for pain that keeps the speaker feeling, and ice for a numbness that would be a relief. Even joy cannot survive: "when I get good news / the happiness gets burned." The verb echoes the "ashes" of the first lines, so the hell image returns inside the speaker's own body.

Formally, the poem is free verse with no regular metre. Its lines stretch and shorten with the speaker's mood. The opening "ashes" line sprawls, as if the walk through hell is dragging on. Rhyme is almost absent until the last stanza, where it suddenly appears: "clear" and "fear," "wall" and "call." These short, tidy couplets feel like a wall closing in, and the neatness contrasts sharply with the confusion they describe. The speaker sees things clearly "behind the wall" but is too afraid to "call." The "cry" and "try" of the next lines pick up the same sound.

The final lines are the most carefully shaped. "I bleed when I cry / not because of cutting" anticipates a literal reading and rejects it. The wound is emotional: the speaker is trying "to rip out my heart / so that I could just forget." The last two lines repeat the same grammar, "So I could start over / So I could turn back time," like a plea said twice. Because they echo the first line, the poem closes its circle.

The poem has rough edges. Fire, ice, hell, heaven and two horror icons crowd in together, and some images do not quite fit. But the pile-up suits a speaker overwhelmed by feeling. Its real strength is a contradiction at its core. The speaker insists "you will never understand" and says they "cannot call," yet the whole poem is addressed to someone and is itself a way of calling out. Beneath the monster costume, it is a request to be heard.

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