Why do you frown? — Summary

my smile fell to the ground as he approached despite the mild summer air i shivered my smile sunk into the ground as he touched me the saltiness of the coastal air mixing with that of my tears my smile got stomped upon and ripped apart as the dress left my body large hands replacing it instead my smile disappeared forevermore as he left me there

alone cold hurt unsmiling.

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The poem follows a young woman, named in the title as Emily, through a sexual assault. It opens with a question from the man, "Why do you frown?", which sounds casual but reads as dismissive, as if her feelings are his to manage. From there, her smile becomes the poem's central image. It falls, sinks, is stomped on and torn apart, and finally disappears "forevermore." Each step matches a worse moment: his approach, his touch, the removal of her dress, his leaving.

The speaker feels fear first, then helplessness and grief. Small details sharpen this. She shivers in mild summer air, and her tears mix with the salty sea air, which places the scene somewhere open and beautiful while the event itself is ugly.

The mood is bleak and quiet. The short closing words, "alone / cold / hurt / unsmiling," land like a series of blows, leaving only emptiness and the sense that something has been taken from her.

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