Whatever Will I Do — Poem analysis

Ezekiel DeanRomantic

Without hearing every word you speak And every single thought you think And watching every time you blink And your beautiful lips upon your drink

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Read the four lines alone and they hang in mid-air. "Without hearing every word you speak" is a clause waiting for a main verb that never arrives. The missing part sits above the poem, in the title. «Whatever Will I Do» is the beginning of the sentence, so the whole piece is one long question: whatever will I do without hearing every word, every thought, every blink, every sip? Dean has split the sentence in two, with the panic in the title and the reasons in the verse. The question is never answered. The poem simply stops, as helpless as the speaker it describes.

The central idea is love as total attention, and the dread of losing it. The poem never says why the speaker would be "without" the beloved. It could be a parting, a distance, or just the exaggeration of someone besotted, and the text leaves this open. What it makes clear is what would be missed. The speaker doesn't mention kisses or promises, only the ordinary stream of another person simply being there.

The list is carefully ordered. It begins with speech, the most public thing a person offers. Then comes "every single thought you think," which asks for something impossible: access to another mind. The poem then drops to the smallest physical event it can find, a blink, which is so brief and involuntary that most people never notice their own. Beginning with the words someone says, it ends up wanting what nobody else would witness. The repeated "every" and the extra push of "single" turn this into loving hyperbole that tips toward obsession. A reader might find it sweet or a little overwhelming, and the poem allows both.

The grammar adds to this. "Hearing" and "watching" are ongoing verb forms, never completed actions, so the speaker's wish is for attention that never ends. The speaker also barely exists. The word "I" appears only in the title, while the four lines belong entirely to "you" and "your," which together appear five times. The beloved fills the poem and the speaker shrinks to a pair of ears and eyes.

The sound pattern has a similar effect. Lines two, three and four end on think, blink and drink, a run of short, clipped rhymes that feels like a chant. The first line's "speak" shares only the final k sound, so the poem opens slightly off-key before it finds its chime. The echo in "thought you think" has the same circling quality, as if the speaker can't stop returning to the same subject. Lines two and three are neat eight-syllable lines with a steady beat: "And EVery SINgle THOUGHT you THINK." The last line runs longer, ten syllables by my count, and "beautiful lips" makes it slow down just where the speaker's gaze lingers.

That last line holds the poem's only openly evaluative word. Until "beautiful," the speaker's feeling has shown only through attention, never been named. Then it appears, almost in passing, attached to lips. "Upon" is a slightly formal, old-fashioned choice for something as everyday as taking a sip. It gives a small gesture a touch of ceremony. The poem also ends on "drink," an object rather than an emotion, so the ordinary moment carries the weight of everything the speaker fears losing.

What makes the poem worth studying is how much it does with so little. It has no story, no setting and no explanation, yet it creates a whole relationship through a list, a rhyme and a title that works as a missing first half. For students, it shows that compression can carry feeling. By the end, the unfinished sentence and the unanswered question feel like the point, because the speaker has no answer to give.

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