Daughter of red wine — Summary

Feng YanInspired

Daughter’s first cry, father’s heart overwhelmed Rice, grain by grain, panned and soaked Father uses hands rubbing warmth from glutinous rice Then buried deep, under Osmanthus fragrant tree Love, love deeply felt, fermented within airtight jar Two feet below fragrance of circle of trees Tamp daughter inch long height.

Love in father’s eyes seeing daughter grow The love measured by beat of his heart.

Daughter marries, altar girl dressed in red by father Fragrance sweet-smelling daughter Pleasing the father’s heart. Married couple pick up glasses Offer toast of love to tearful father Grey-headed man drinks to his daughter’s happiness.

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Feng Yan's poem follows a father from his daughter's birth to her wedding, using the making of rice wine as a way to show his love. When she is born, he soaks and rubs the glutinous rice, then buries the jar beneath an osmanthus tree. The poem suggests the wine will wait there for years, much as his feelings quietly deepen while she grows. The line about measuring her height and the beat of his heart shows how closely he watches her childhood.

The mood is tender and patient, and it turns bittersweet at the end. At the wedding, the daughter is dressed in red, and the wine, now ripened, is shared as a toast. The father is tearful and grey-headed, glad for her happiness but also aware of letting her go. The speaker seems to look on with warm admiration, treating the father's love as something slow, hidden, and sweet, like the wine itself.

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