«One day I said "please, hold my hands…» — Summary

One day I said "please, hold my hands Promise don't forget me" I confessed my fears, my dreams, my love You said "Yes, of course I'll remember of us" You said "No problem, I feel the same to you" I believed in every word, every confession I had hopes From time to time you returned saying again "I love you so much, no doubt" And I dreamed I made plans for us You repeat again and again "I love you my baby, no doubt" Suddenly, you disappear No replied to my messages And I think "Oh no, he has a problem! What does he doing?!" I worried with your health Suddenly, you return And simply says "I don't love you like I said yesterday" In the end, you were never sure I and my fuckin ilusions

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Gabrielle Andreza's untitled poem tells the story of a love that falls apart through broken promises. The speaker begins by asking for reassurance: hold my hands, don't forget me. She opens up completely, sharing her fears, dreams and love, and the other person answers with warm, easy words. She believes him and starts to hope, and then to plan a future for two.

The turn comes with the disappearance. He goes silent, and instead of getting angry, she worries about his health and imagines he must be in trouble. That detail shows how much she trusts him. Then he comes back and says he doesn't love her the way he said "yesterday," which makes all those earlier declarations feel flimsy.

The mood moves from tender and hopeful to anxious, then to bitter disappointment. The last line is blunt and angry, with a rough word that shows she is hurting. The slightly awkward English also gives the poem a raw, unpolished feel, as if the words came out straight from the heart.

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