Moon. — Summary

That name brought life in me,like the moon fills the darkness with beauty.Oh darkness,the more you exist,the more I can see the stars that I love so much.The more you spread,the brighter the moon is that I'm in love with. She was like the moon.But brighter,colourful. But like the moon,there was a side she never showed.A young soul,filled with kindness,in a world asking for her hatered.A rebelious,trembling mess of stars.Through the ruins she made flowers grow. Oh young soul,how much blood have you spilled for other's happyness?How many times have you knelled down acheing for their safty,brave one?How many times have I wished for your return,my friend? Are you a star,my soul? Is that you make everyone's wishes come true except yours? Are you stardust,my heart? Are you forgoten dreams combined into a new one? Are you the moon,my friend?Is that why I cant see you whole,but I can only remember a mere glimpse of your existance?Or are you keeping me company through the darkness of the night?

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The speaker is writing about a friend, Helen, whose name brings them comfort the way moonlight does in a dark night. The moon runs through the whole piece as a metaphor: she is bright and colourful, but, like the moon, she has a side she never shows. The speaker describes her as a kind, young soul living in a world that seems to want her to be hateful, a "rebellious, trembling mess of stars" who still makes flowers grow from ruins.

The feeling underneath is admiration mixed with worry and longing. The speaker sees how much she gives up for other people's happiness and safety, and wishes she would come back, which suggests she is absent or out of reach. The closing questions, asking if she is a star, stardust or the moon, show the speaker trying to understand someone they only partly see. The mood is tender, wistful and a little sad, though the last line leaves a hopeful hint that she may still be keeping them company in the dark.

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