Metaphors — Summary

gwritespoetryContemplative

The empty house is a metaphor, Of a family gone away, Where they went? Who knows, But they are gone to stay.

The birds singing in the morning, Tell you about a clock, The hands spining in inches per hour, But still they never stop.

If life had a metaphor, I think it would be a song, Enjoyable evey second, But never very long,

The girl in the corner, Is a metaphor of yourself, A pretty face to look at, But more than a trophy on the shelf,

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Each stanza of "Metaphors" takes an ordinary thing and asks what it might really mean. An empty house stands for a family that has left for good, and the speaker shrugs off where they went. Birdsong in the morning becomes a reminder of a clock, with time creeping forward and never stopping. Life itself is compared to a song: enjoyable every second, but short. The last stanza turns to a girl in the corner, who is said to be a metaphor for "yourself," attractive but worth more than a trophy on a shelf.

The speaker sounds thoughtful and a little wistful. There is a gentle sadness about loss and passing time, but it is not heavy or angry. The mood is quiet and reflective, helped by short lines and simple rhymes that feel like a casual musing. The ending is the most hopeful note: it suggests a person should be valued for more than how they look. The final stanza also trails off with a comma, which leaves the thought feeling unfinished.

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