ode to rain — Summary

drops of water fall on my outstretched hand i sat waiting for the rain to land

the falling of rain was like you and me memories out in the open for us to see

the rain dried up, the essence never did i cried but you never batted an eyelid

i was heartbroken, didn't you know? no, you were too busy watching the snow.

i looked at you with tears in my eyes did you care? no, all you ever told was lies.

i wish it was like rain, that could be wiped away but truth is i'll remember. at least for another day.

you have absolutely no idea what you did to me, you always said the rainbow would come but i can't see

well alas, let the rain wash me away i don't care if i see you another day

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Gwyn's "ode to rain" is a breakup poem in which rain stands in for a painful relationship. The speaker begins by sitting with an outstretched hand, waiting for drops to land, and then compares the rain to "you and me," as if shared memories were falling out in the open. Even when the rain stops, the "essence" stays, just as the feeling lingers after the relationship ends.

The speaker's hurt grows more direct as the poem goes on. They cry while the other person doesn't react, watches the snow instead, and, according to the speaker, only ever told lies. There is a wish that memory could be wiped away like rain, but the speaker admits it can't. The promised rainbow never appears. By the end, the mood shifts from sadness to tired defiance: let the rain wash the speaker away, and they no longer care whether they see this person again. The tone is raw and bitter, with a thread of resignation running underneath.

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