By The Child — Summary

Laughs, light, and twisted smiles If only it was seen by the child.

Surrounded by covered faces If only it was known by the child.

Love turns hate If only it was detected by the child.

Games turn to fate If only it was undiscovered by the child.

Walls learn to stay strong If only it was controlled by the child.

Happiness be not a blanket If only it was worn by the child

Love be not a mask If only it was learned by the child.

If the dark is seen as light Let it be seen by the child.

If something called love should exist Let it be made by the child.

And if love could stay forever Let it be proved by the child.

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Almost every stanza in this poem pairs a painful adult reality with the wish that a child had noticed it, understood it, or kept it at a distance. The first half describes things that look warm on the surface but aren't: laughter that comes with "twisted smiles," faces that are covered, love that slides into hate, games that turn into fate. The repeated line "If only it was... by the child" sounds like regret, as if the speaker wishes someone young had been spared, or had been sharp enough to see the truth sooner.

The second half shifts. Happiness becomes a "blanket" and love a "mask," both ways of hiding. Then the closing stanzas turn to "Let it be," handing the child the job of deciding whether love is real and whether it can last. The mood is wistful and uneasy, with a thread of doubt. The speaker seems unsure love exists at all, and the poem ends on a fragile hope that a child's clear eyes might answer what adults can't.

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