Why — Poem analysis

Jessea L. VaughanContemplative

Why build a house If you're gonna just Lock it up and throw away the key? Why create a language Then teach it to no one And let it fade away? Why do we have roads That lead to empty buildings and dad ends? Why do we sit in a classroom When the things we're taught Have no real place beyond receiving a Diploma at graduation? Why are there minutes Why are there hours Since when have clocks been kings to whom men bow? Yes I know It's been this way Everybody knows But what I don't know What I wanna know is Why?

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Nobody in Jessea L. Vaughan's "Why" gets an answer, and that is the point. The speaker lists things that exist but seem to serve no purpose, such as houses, languages, roads, lessons and hours. Then, instead of arguing, the speaker keeps asking. The central idea is that habit can protect an absurdity. Things "have been this way" for so long that asking about them feels childish, and the poem insists the question is still worth asking.

The poem has no regular rhyme and no fixed metre. Its rhythm is that of someone thinking aloud, with short lines and sudden stops. The colloquial "gonna" and "wanna" keep the tone close to speech, so the poem sounds like a frustrated person talking, not a lecture. Structure does the work that rhyme might have done. The repeated "Why" works like a drumbeat, and the lines "Why are there minutes / Why are there hours" drop even the question mark, as if the speaker's impatience has outrun punctuation. A quieter echo links the first two images, since a key is thrown "away" and a language fades "away." In both cases something made is simply lost.

The imagery moves from the physical to the abstract. A house and its key come first, and the speaker borrows the idiom of imprisonment, "lock it up and throw away the key," and applies it to a home. A building made for living in becomes a vault of wasted potential. The language that is created and then "taught to no one" is the same waste on a larger scale, a whole way of speaking built and then left to die. The roads that "lead to empty buildings and dad ends" add a third picture. A road exists to connect, but these connect nothing. The printed "dad ends" is presumably a slip for "dead ends," though it is hard not to hear the phrase as a small accident that fits the theme, a road that goes nowhere and a word that slightly misses.

The middle of the poem turns from objects to institutions. The classroom is the sharpest complaint, and the line break helps it land. The things we're taught "have no real place beyond receiving a / Diploma at graduation." The sentence ends the line on the small word "a," so it hangs for a moment and then drops onto the capitalised "Diploma." The pause mimics the disappointment it describes. Learning shrinks into a piece of paper, and the verb "receiving" makes the student passive. The speaker is not saying education is worthless, only that it has been emptied of any purpose beyond its own ceremony.

The clock line stands out because its language changes. After plain, conversational questions, "Since when have clocks been kings to whom men bow?" sounds almost old-fashioned. It is the poem's boldest metaphor, turning minutes and hours into a hierarchy with a ruler and obedient subjects. The question "since when" also shifts the inquiry from "why does this exist?" to "who gave it power?" Time, which seems the most natural thing on the list, is shown to be as arbitrary as the others.

Then comes the turn. "Yes I know / It's been this way / Everybody knows" is the poem's only concession, spoken in short, flat lines that imitate the weary answer any questioner gets. Everybody knows, and that is the problem, because a shared assumption is not an explanation. The poem finishes with "What I wanna know is / Why?", and the single word on its own line is left unanswered. The poem does not offer a solution, because its target is complacency, the habit of not asking.

That is what makes the poem worth reading. Its questions are the kind a small child asks and an adult learns to stop asking, and the poem argues that this loss is a cost. Students will recognise the classroom and the clock at once, and the poem invites them to wonder which of their own routines would survive the same question.

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