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Strand of hair no.5

i walked outside i let the wind guide all the plants are dry what lands on me, is a fly

i see that it's getting dark i throw the nearest rock i don't know why i did it i get on the dirt and sit

it's starting to get dark but i could honestly care less this is how get rid of my stress

when the trees ask if i'm fine, the answer's always yes but on the other hand, i don't like people they're too boring and bland i'd rather talk to a bunch of sand i'd rather talk to a bunch of sand

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A speaker wanders outside with no plan, letting the wind decide where to go. The scene is dry and a little lifeless: parched plants, a fly landing on them. As evening comes on, they throw a rock for no reason they can explain, then sit down in the dirt. They say they don't care that it's getting dark, and they name this small, aimless routine as their way of getting rid of stress.

The tone is flat, casual, and slightly deadpan, helped by the simple rhymes (guide/fly, rock/dark, yes/bland). The speaker says they're fine when the trees ask, but the poem hints that "yes" may be an automatic answer. Their real feeling comes out at the end: people seem boring and bland, and they'd rather talk to sand. Repeating that line twice makes it sound both funny and stubborn. The overall mood is lonely but calm, a quiet retreat into nature rather than a loud outburst.

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