«Tomatoes are nasty when raw, just like you…» — Summary

Tomatoes are nasty when raw, just like you i hate tomatoes raw tomatoes, that is i rather get my vitamin k from cabbage

but yet again, cooked tomatoes are still manageable as long as i don’t eat them alone

raw tomatoes are nasty they don’t taste right

as much as i love red, it doesn’t redeem the fact that raw tomatoes are still nasty

I hate you when you speak and do things in a raw manner, that is i rather go back to when you actually respected me

but yet again, when you’re filtered, you are still manageable as long as i don’t take in your vicious words

you are a jerk you don’t act right anymore

as much as i adore you It doesn’t redeem the fact that you are still a jerk

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Lowercased lyn starts out sounding like a petty rant about tomatoes, then reveals that the tomatoes are standing in for a person. The first half complains about how awful raw tomatoes are: they don't taste right, and even cooked ones are only bearable in company. The second half repeats the same structure almost line for line, but now the target is someone the speaker once respected and still adores.

The comparison works because the humour slowly gives way to hurt. "Raw" becomes a word for unfiltered cruelty, and the speaker can only stand this person when their "vicious words" are softened or kept out. The line "you don't act right anymore" suggests the person has changed, and the speaker misses how things used to be.

The mood is wry, tired and quietly sad. The blunt, repetitive phrasing sounds like someone trying to stay casual while admitting that love doesn't cancel out being treated badly.

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