XIV - Petricore in the room — Summary

Luca FlautoCheerful

Suddenly the rain caught us as a fresh coat. We ran in the house wet and happy.

The windows were open and so our souls. The scent of petricore fast showed up and spread in the bedroom.

Now the light is disappearing and a fresh breath of summer is making us hugging tight.

I could hear raindrops falling on the glass like warm tears on my face. I felt cosy and, happily, I fell asleep.

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

A sudden rain shower sends two people running home, soaked and laughing. Once inside, the poem slows down and settles into a quiet, intimate evening. The speaker tells us the windows are open, and compares this to open souls, as if the storm has loosened something in them. The smell of wet earth, which the poem calls "petricore," drifts through the bedroom and fills the space.

As the light fades, a cool summer breeze pushes the pair closer, and they hold each other tight. The speaker listens to raindrops on the glass and likens them to warm tears on their face. It's an interesting image, since the tears suggest release rather than sadness. The final lines are simple: the speaker feels cosy and falls asleep happily.

The mood is calm, tender and sensory. Scent, sound, touch and fading light all work together to create a feeling of safety, closeness and contentment after a sudden burst of weather.

Read also

More by Luca Flauto

All poems
DreamyLuca Flauto

XXII - Flying Away

What a feeling flying away again, after years of stubbornness and fear. Watching brave kids
AnxiousLuca Flauto

IV - Ravens in Twilight

How's possible? You, made of black velvet, so bright, so shiny, eat the worst blood,
SadLuca Flauto

XVI - Blurred

Shades are getting longer they disappear at night, just to be enclosed underneath a street lamp.