5 • Wilderness — Summary

We waited the bus, waited to jump into the wilderness of the Isle.

Steep cliffs dive in the foamy sea, and so the shrubs.

We swayed on the crooked road, left to the seaside, right to the rocky hills.

I felt the sparkling air of the south, where the elements combine in a marvellous painting.

Twitchers are looking for unknown discoveries, the wind cuts their noise leaving just a thin muffed voice.

We reached the beach the whitest of all I've seen. An unpleasant thought, the one about untouchable things.

I dreamt to feel the clear water mirror all over me, slowly feeling the ocean shaping around my body.

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Luca Flauto's poem follows a trip to an island, from waiting for the bus to reaching a white beach. The speaker is eager from the start, ready to "jump into" the wilderness. The bus ride along a crooked road, with sea on one side and rocky hills on the other, sets the scene, and the speaker describes the landscape as a "marvellous painting" where the elements combine.

Not everything is calm. The wind swallows the voices of the twitchers, the bird-watchers hunting for discoveries, so human noise seems small against nature. At the beach, a shadow appears: an "unpleasant thought" about "untouchable things." The poem doesn't explain it, but it suggests the speaker senses a gap between admiring beauty and truly belonging in it. The ending turns to a dream of the water covering the body and the ocean slowly shaping around it. The mood is awed, dreamy and a little wistful, with a quiet wish to be absorbed into the landscape.

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