Ice rink — Summary

I've the ugliest ice skates in the state, And I arrived to the rink way too late, It's difficult to weave through the sea of people When they're all wondrously, flawlessly great.

How can I not be bothered when I slip, Though all the others give me a smart tip? I keep spiralling, all's becoming obstacle, How can they think we're both on the same ship?

For them, the ice is ground, while I'm frozen, A porcelain kitsch doll, her cheeks rosen, Some seem to enjoy questioning my wellbeing, Frankly, this is not what I would've chosen.

To give a subtle message to you all -if you're a plume, then I'm a cannonball Which can only remain disguised for a lifetime, But it'll become metal shards during fall.

I, a cannonball, pretend I can skate, I am aware one day I'll meet my fate -honesty has been my enemy since day one, However, my foes don't pass through the gate.

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The speaker is at a crowded ice rink, feeling out of place. Their skates are ugly, they arrived late, and everyone else seems effortlessly graceful. Slipping and spinning out of control, they get advice from other skaters but don't feel that these people understand their situation. Others treat the ice as solid ground, while the speaker feels frozen, like a fragile porcelain doll with painted cheeks.

The second half turns to a bigger image: the speaker is a cannonball pretending to be a feather. The disguise can only last so long before it breaks into metal shards in a fall. The skating works as a stand-in for any situation where someone fakes belonging, and the poem suggests the speaker feels like an impostor. The mood is self-mocking and anxious, with a wry humour on top. The ending is uneasy: the speaker expects to be found out, and admits honesty has always been a problem for them.

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