6 (thinkin' bout' you) — Summary

tonight I am at home thinkin' bout' you yeah, we don't talk anymore but I hope you're doing alright I remember the day we first met funny really, we both had sinus infections in the nurses office, miserable I recall thinking to myself "I've heard rumors about that kid, he's cute but I should stay away" I fell into the trap of your gleaming smile we exchanged numbers right then and there, in front of the nurse ahh, I was so happy but that was the beginning 1 year, 5 months ago

I'm not happy anymore

when I was a young girl, about 7, I fell out of the tree in front of my house I swear I broke my heart at the time I came crying to my mother she whipped off my tears with her thumb and said "baby girl, your ribs are there to protect your heart. you're gonna be just fine." turns out your ribs break pretty easily the moment you meet a beautiful boy in the nurses office the lies he told me they rolled off his tongue like it was second nature deep down inside he knew it wouldn't last he avoided the words "always, forever" as I remember, as he would say "a long time"

you made me feel special the typical "good morning gorgeous" texts yeah, I'm ashamed I fell into that trap too

one night I recall like it was yesterday it was over you left me on the side of the road crying

nah, I'm not over you you got a new girl now "3 months strong" she says I just hope she doesn't fall into the trap of your beautiful brown eyes

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Late at night, the speaker sits at home thinking about an ex who no longer speaks to her. She hopes he's okay, but the poem quickly shows how much she's still hurting. She looks back on how they met, both sick in the nurse's office, and how she ignored the rumors about him and fell for his smile. The early excitement of swapping numbers gives way to the plain statement, "I'm not happy anymore."

The heart of the poem is her mother's childhood advice that ribs protect the heart. The speaker twists it: ribs "break pretty easily" when a beautiful boy comes along. She also admits he never promised "always, forever," only "a long time," and that she was ashamed to be won over by sweet texts. The mood is raw and wistful, a mix of regret, embarrassment, and lingering love. The ending shows this most clearly. Even now, she wishes his new girlfriend will avoid the same trap, his brown eyes.

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