Nature as the ‘Other’ — Poem analysis

marialegaultContemplative

Where my skin ends And the “other” begins, Is a space to make choices.

I move, I walk, and my body Burns energy, glowing energy, Moving under my skin.

Sitting in a house, a car Everywhere, air-conditioned air Leaves me feeling – Hot, cold, tired, dry.

Moving on my own two feet Feeling sun-soaked air push Against my body, Leaves me feeling – Strong, proud, happy, clear.

Making the choices that Leave me feeling good Isn’t always easy.

I don’t want to be separate from the “other”.

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Skin, we are usually taught, is where we stop. Marialegault's "Nature as the 'Other'" begins by questioning that tidy idea. "Where my skin ends / And the 'other' begins, / Is a space to make choices." The grammar matters here: the whole clause about where skin ends and the "other" begins becomes the subject of the sentence, and the verb tells us what it is: "a space". A border turns into a place the speaker can stand in. The rest of the poem asks what to do there. Its central idea is that everyday choices about how we move through the world either widen the gap between ourselves and nature or close it.

The second stanza turns to the body. "I move, I walk, and my body / Burns energy, glowing energy, / Moving under my skin." The short clauses move at walking pace, and the repetition of "energy" works like a self-correction. "Burns" sounds harsh until "glowing" softens it, so the body's heat reads as life rather than damage. Notice that the skin returns here. The energy moves *under* it, which makes the boundary feel like a living surface, not a wall.

The poem's core is a pair of mirrored stanzas. In the first, "Sitting in a house, a car / Everywhere, air-conditioned air / Leaves me feeling – / Hot, cold, tired, dry." The word "Everywhere" slips into a list of indoor places, as if the indoors had swallowed the outside. The doubled "air-conditioned air" sounds flat and manufactured, as though the air must be labelled to show it has been processed. The result is a list of contradictions. "Hot, cold" in one breath suggests a body that can't tell what it wants. The sentence is also passive: sitting "leaves me" feeling, and things are done to the speaker.

The answering stanza reverses nearly everything. "Moving on my own two feet" claims agency with "own". "Sun-soaked air" is rich and wet where "air-conditioned" was dry. The air now "push[es] / Against my body," and this is the first real contact between self and "other". Pressure is how we feel where we end, so the boundary is felt most clearly when nature touches it. The dash before the result list works as a drumroll, and this time the list is consistent: "Strong, proud, happy, clear." The last adjective sets mental clarity against the earlier tiredness.

The poem is free verse with no rhyme, and its diction is plain, mostly short words. The line breaks often fall mid-phrase ("my body / Burns", "push / Against my body"), so the sentences keep spilling over the edge of the line, much as the speaker wants to spill over the edge of the self. The parallel structure, with the same sentence frame and a different activity and result, does the persuading without any argument being stated.

The final stanzas keep the poem from becoming a slogan. "Making the choices that / Leave me feeling good / Isn't always easy." This is flat and undramatic, and honest about how hard it is to choose the walk over the seat. Then comes the last line, which stands alone and runs unbroken, longer than anything before it: "I don't want to be separate from the 'other'." It is the only place the speaker states a desire outright. The quotation marks around "other" also deserve attention. They suggest a borrowed word the speaker doesn't fully accept. The title presents nature as the Other, but the ending refuses the distance the title implies.

The poem's significance lies in its scale. It makes no grand gesture toward forests or climate and stays with one body, one walk and one kind of air. Environmental connection becomes a question of how we feel, and the comfort of climate-controlled life is shown to have a cost. The contrast is neat, perhaps too neat, but that simplicity is what makes the poem easy to test against your own experience: walk outside, notice what changes, and decide where your own "space to make choices" begins.

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