Nature as the ‘Other’ — Summary

marialegaultContemplative

Where my skin ends And the “other” begins, Is a space to make choices.

I move, I walk, and my body Burns energy, glowing energy, Moving under my skin.

Sitting in a house, a car Everywhere, air-conditioned air Leaves me feeling – Hot, cold, tired, dry.

Moving on my own two feet Feeling sun-soaked air push Against my body, Leaves me feeling – Strong, proud, happy, clear.

Making the choices that Leave me feeling good Isn’t always easy.

I don’t want to be separate from the “other”.

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Marialegault's poem starts with a simple question: where does "I" stop and everything else start? The speaker places that boundary at the skin, but calls it "a space to make choices," which suggests it isn't a wall so much as a doorway.

The middle of the poem sets two ways of living side by side. Indoors, in houses and cars with air-conditioned air, the speaker feels "hot, cold, tired, dry," a list that sounds flat and uncomfortable. Outdoors, walking and feeling the sun-soaked air push against the body, the speaker feels "strong, proud, happy, clear." The shift from drained to alive is the heart of the poem.

The tone is calm and honest rather than preachy. The speaker admits that choosing what feels good "isn't always easy." The final line, short and plain, reads like a quiet wish: not to be separate from nature, the "other." The mood is warm, reflective, and gently hopeful.

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