FOUNDATIONS — Poem analysis

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

I have become obsessed with underpinnings:

Olga no longer makes the Daisy in my size. They assume small women want padding–”contour” they call it. But contours are hot, and they itch, and besides, I told the clerk, I am happy with my size. And she, who guessed my numbers by looking– she who for forty years had seen all sizes, had fitted corsets and prostheses, measured without a blink over sags and scars– said Well, you ought to be, and searched the bins along the wall to see if there might be one more, and there wasn’t. She found a substitution, adequate, but not what I’d hoped for. She wrapped it in tissue and I paid.

What happens to prayers– our own devices, nothing left to fit? Discontinuites, perhaps, and God the old woman with her measure, her calm and kindly face. It’s a shame, my dear, but that’s how it goes. Here’s something else that might suffice.

I carried my little package to the café where I go to watch the traffic pass. A new brick sidewalk there, wide: tables and chairs outdoors, better than before. They dug deep, below the level of the street. They found old coins and a diamond ring, but best of all, windows covered over with rubble. All those years with nothing to see but dirt.

Amazing, what holds things up, or doesn’t, the dark and hidden structure undergirding it all.

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Mary F. C. Pratt's "Foundations" begins with a confession that sounds almost like a joke: "I have become obsessed with underpinnings." The word works on two levels. In the first scene it means underclothing, and by the last line it means the buried structures that hold up a street, a city, perhaps a life. The poem moves from one meaning to the other without ever announcing the shift, and that quiet movement is the source of its charm.

The opening scene is comic and very particular. The speaker cannot find her size in a line the shop has discontinued, and she objects to the way "they assume small women / want padding." The details are sharp: contours "are hot, and they itch." Her declaration, "I am happy with my size," is a small act of self-acceptance, and the clerk's reply, "Well, you ought to be," is dry and affectionate. The clerk is the poem's most memorable figure. She has "for forty years" seen every body, "fitted corsets and prostheses, / measured without a blink over sags and scars." The long, unhurried sentence, built on the repeated "she who," gives her a quiet dignity. She is unshockable and practical. When the right size isn't there, she can only offer "a substitution, adequate, / but not what I'd hoped for." The plain closing line, "She wrapped it in tissue and I paid," refuses any drama.

Then the poem turns. "What happens to prayers– / our own devices, nothing left to fit?" Prayers, like undergarments, are things we shape to ourselves, and they too can be discontinued when the old forms stop fitting. The clerk is quietly transformed into "God the old woman / with her measure, her calm and kindly face." This God does not rage or promise anything. Her speech is the shopkeeper's: "It's a shame, my dear, / but that's how it goes. / Here's something else that might suffice." The comfort is real but small. Words like "adequate" and "suffice" suggest that the poem's idea of consolation is modest. We are given a substitute, not the thing we asked for.

The third stanza carries the speaker, with her "little package," to a café where she watches traffic. The new brick sidewalk has been dug "deep, below the level of the street," and the workers have found "old coins and a diamond ring," the kind of treasure we expect. The poem's real prize, though, is "windows covered over with rubble." Whole windows, once meant to let in light, have been buried below the modern street, and the last line of the stanza, "All those years with nothing to see but dirt," carries a gentle, wry sadness. Something was there all along, unseen. The image echoes the clerk, who sees accurately by looking, and the speaker, who sits and watches, so the poem keeps returning to the question of what we can and cannot see.

Formally the poem is free verse with no rhyme and no fixed rhythm. Its lines are short and conversational, closer to someone telling a story over coffee than to a performance. Enjambment lets sentences spill over line breaks, as in "and searched / the bins along the wall to see if there might be / one more, and there wasn't," where the deflating end of the sentence feels like the shop's disappointment itself. The closing couplet is the only moment of open reflection: "Amazing, what holds things up, or doesn't, / the dark and hidden structure undergirding it all." Those last three words are deliberately heavy, and "or doesn't" admits that support can fail.

What makes the poem significant is its balance. It never claims that faith is lost or restored. It suggests only that a great deal of life, from bodies to belief to cities, rests on hidden things we notice mainly when they are missing or when someone digs them up. By using an ordinary errand to say so, the poem lets a serious idea arrive without solemnity, which may be why it is easy to remember.

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