IN THE KITCHEN: From the American Folksong Suite — Poem analysis

I like it when he comes in here, after supper, when the washing up is mostly done and I’m just mopping the table and setting things to rights. He sits on the flour barrel in the corner and plays his music, and sings. We don’t talk much. I don’t suppose there would be trouble if we did– who cares what an old Irishman and an old woman like me do in our free time? Mam said I was lucky to get this work, but I think not lucky–I’m a good cook, and they know it. At least I got a couple things out of the plantation–cooking, and my baby. I’m glad she’s up north now. It’s not safe here for a pretty girl like her, and the lady of the house where she works is teaching her to read in the evenings. These railroad men don’t scare me: I’ve seen it all. I can take care of myself. And he comes in to sing just at the dangerous time of day, looks after me, in a way, always reminds me to bolt the door.

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The kitchen in this poem is the one place where the speaker can relax. Her day's work is nearly finished, and an old Irishman sits on the flour barrel to play and sing. Nothing happens in the usual sense. Two people share a room and hardly speak. Yet the poem turns this small scene into a portrait of a woman who has learned to count her gains carefully and to guard them.

The opening line, "I like it when he comes in here," is plain and a little shy. Pratt gives us no scenery and no introduction, only a voice already in the middle of its evening. The details that follow suggest the speaker's past without spelling it out. She got something "out of the plantation," her daughter is "up north," and the daughter is being taught to read. The poem never explains, and it doesn't need to. The reader pieces together a life from the way the speaker mentions things in passing.

The most telling moment is her disagreement with her mother. "Mam said I was lucky to get this work, / but I think not lucky–I'm a good cook, / and they know it." The word "lucky" belongs to someone who expects little from the world. The speaker replaces it with skill and a fair exchange: she is employed because she is good. A few lines later she lists what she has kept: "cooking, and my baby." The little phrase "At least" and the flat, unadorned list show how carefully she measures what she has gained, and how much those two things are worth to her.

The poem is free verse, with no regular meter or rhyme scheme, and it reads like someone talking to herself while wiping a table. Lines are of uneven length, and the syntax is loose and conversational. Short sentences sit beside longer ones: "We don't talk much." "I've seen it all." "I can take care of myself." These blunt statements work like the bolt of a door, closing off argument. The dashes, as in "if we did–" and "lucky–I'm", give the voice a spoken hesitation, as if she steps round a thought and then goes on.

Because the poem is so unrhymed, the one clear rhyme stands out near the end: "just at the dangerous time of day, / looks after me, in a way." The rhyme comes quietly, but the music matches the subject, since the poem is about a man who sings. The phrase "in a way" is the speaker's careful hedge. She won't say outright that she needs protecting, because she has just insisted she can look after herself. The final line, "always reminds me to bolt the door," settles the tension neatly. He reminds her, but she is the one who bolts it. The decision stays in her hands.

Her description of the pair is also revealing. "An old Irishman / and an old woman like me" makes them sound too ordinary for anyone to notice, and her question "who cares?" half dismisses the idea of trouble. Yet the very fact she raises it hints that people might care, and that the friendship crosses lines she is aware of. Calling herself old is partly a shield. It lets her treat the friendship as harmless, a bit of "free time" and nothing more. The tenderness is real but never named, and the poem avoids romance altogether. What it offers instead is companionship that asks nothing and is trusted all the more for that.

The speaker's fears and hopes are set apart as well. The dangers are real: "It's not safe here for a pretty girl like her," and the railroad men are close by. But she says they don't scare her, and the flat "I've seen it all" tells us what that confidence cost. The hope is for her daughter, whose reading lessons "in the evenings" echo the speaker's own quiet evening, a small ordinary kindness with large consequences.

The subtitle, "From the American Folksong Suite," suggests this is one piece in a sequence. That fits a poem built around a singer and a story you could imagine being passed on by voice. It gives space to a figure history seldom records, a cook at the end of her working day, and it lets her speak without making her a symbol. Its achievement is restraint. The poem trusts small things, a barrel, a tune, a bolted door, to carry a whole life, and it leaves us with a woman who is wary, proud and, for a short while each evening, at ease.

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