END OF THE HARVEST — Poem analysis

Mary F. C. Pratt2002Contemplative

You don’t sing any more, or chatter. Weather doesn’t matter. It is important to keep the apple bag straps flat, most important to lift with your thighs.

What does pain matter? Hands the color of uncured ham, ass cold in the wet jeans, feet cold with water from frosted grass seeping through cheap cracked boots.

You keep trying to think about war and Wall Street, troubles of your friends. You keep trying to pray. All you can pray is apple, apple, apple; all you can think is one at a time, one more.

Twiggy remains of goldfinch nests are bound with trellis twine. Leaves fall into your bag. Snowgeese blow away on the first sharp north wind.

You don’t pick for money or pleasure or fruit, you pick because it’s there, because the crop must come in.

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The first thing Mary F. C. Pratt's poem takes away is noise: "You don't sing any more, or chatter." The line suggests that earlier in the harvest there was singing and talk, and that by now both have been worn off. What remains is the job itself. "End of the Harvest" is about picking apples in cold, wet, late-season conditions, and its central idea is that when work becomes grueling enough, it strips away every motive except necessity. The final stanza states this outright: "you pick because it's there, / because the crop must come in."

The voice is striking. Pratt addresses the reader as "you," which pulls us into the orchard, but it also sounds like a veteran passing on rules. "It is important to keep the apple bag straps flat, / most important to lift with your thighs" is practical, almost deadpan advice. Climbing from "important" to "most important" makes a back-saving technique feel like the highest law. The next line, "What does pain matter?", is a flat rhetorical question that dismisses suffering before it has even been described. That description then arrives in a rush of grimly physical images: "Hands the color of uncured ham," "ass cold in the wet jeans," feet soaked through "cheap cracked boots." The comparison to ham is the sharpest. It turns the picker's hands into raw meat, as if the body were becoming another thing to be processed. "Cheap" and "cracked" also hint, though only by inference, that this is not comfortable or well-paid work. The blunt word "ass" refuses to dress any of this up.

These lines are also built from fragments. "Hands the color…", "ass cold…" and "feet cold…" have no real verbs, so they pile up like sensations too numb to organize into sentences. The poem's sound supports the roughness. "Cheap cracked boots" clatters with hard c and k sounds, while "seeping" slows the line into a soft, creeping wetness.

There is almost no rhyme. The one exception is the opening pair, "chatter" and "matter," a small chime that appears just as the poem announces that chatter is gone. "Matter" then returns in "What does pain matter?", like a word the speaker keeps using to talk herself past discomfort. The stanzas run four, five, five, five, four lines, so the poem begins and ends with its shortest, most severe statements. The lines are short and clipped, with none of the sweep we might expect from a "harvest poem."

The third stanza gives the poem its emotional center. The picker tries to think about "war / and Wall Street, troubles of your friends," the large public and private worries of ordinary life, and cannot hold onto them. Even prayer shrinks: "All you can pray is apple, apple, apple." The repetition works like a chant or a rosary, and it also shows how completely the task has colonized the mind. "One at a time, one more" is the same kind of mantra. Labor and devotion merge here, and it is left open whether that is a loss or a kind of grace.

Only in the fourth stanza does the poem look up from the bag. Suddenly there are no "you" statements, only the world: the "twiggy remains of goldfinch nests" bound with trellis twine, leaves dropping into the bag, snow geese blown away "on the first sharp north wind." Everything else is leaving or already abandoned, while the picker stays. The empty nests also echo the opening line, since the birds' singing has gone out of the orchard as well. And the nests tangled in the human-made twine quietly show nature and labor sharing the same space.

The ending is the poem's boldest move. "You don't pick for money / or pleasure or fruit" removes three reasons in turn, and "or fruit" is the surprising one: not even the apples are the point. "Because it's there" echoes a familiar phrase people use when they cannot explain a hard undertaking, and here it sounds oddly dignified. The poem refuses to romanticize harvest, and it refuses to pity the picker either. It finds seriousness in the plain fact of finishing what must be finished, and that is what makes it worth reading.

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