«I only have one request…» — Summary

I only have one request That we remember who we were Our perception was blurred Our subconscious could see clearly That there was nothing left

Our walls came tumbling down Our hearts slid to our sleeves It felt as though the ground had parted from our feet In this moment we were left utterly weightless The safety we had been searching for was found

We created a home within our hearts The only flaw are our faulty keys for we never keep them attached to you or me They dissolved within our bloodstream We promised to stay this way when reality restarts

Slowly as the sun comes up we are pulled back behind our guarded gates It felt as though there were seas we crossed Those seas transmute to poisoned lakes We hide from the pain, our souls numb

Remembrance of my request slowly fades Maybe who we were isn't who we are We want to allow love When we're sober, love is hard Yet, recollection of our connection vaguely intoxicates

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Mingo Perry's untitled poem looks back on a moment of closeness that the speaker is afraid of losing. The speaker asks only that the two people remember who they were when their defenses dropped, when walls fell, hearts sat on sleeves, and they felt weightless and safe. The home they built "within our hearts" has a flaw, though: the keys dissolved in their blood, so getting back in isn't simple.

Then morning comes and they retreat behind their "guarded gates." The seas they crossed together turn into "poisoned lakes," and they go numb to avoid pain. The speaker admits the request is already fading and wonders whether who they were is still who they are. The words "when we're sober, love is hard" suggest that the openness came from some kind of intoxication, though the poem never says what. The mood is wistful and uneasy, a longing for honesty that only seems to survive in a hazy memory.

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