Springs — Poem analysis

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I'm jealous of the springs.

The ones that jump back, even if they're being compressed and crushed.

If I could do that, maybe I could love myself like that.

I could help people and bring them happiness and take care of them.

But my spring is a little broken, the coils have been twisted, though yes, I get back up but my stance is trembling I shake I tumble I break down.

But it does it's best, to get back up.

So i'll keep going.

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Jealousy is an odd way to begin a poem about hope, yet "Springs" opens with exactly that confession: "I'm jealous of the springs." There is no scene-setting and no decoration. The speaker admits to envying a coil of metal, and the whole poem grows from that admission. What they envy is precise. Springs "jump back, / even if they're being compressed and crushed." The key phrase is "even if." Springs aren't admired for escaping pressure, only for returning after it.

The second stanza shows what is really at stake: "If I could do that, / maybe I could love myself like that." Self-love becomes a prize for bouncing back, and the hesitant "maybe" shows how shaky that bargain is. The wish then spills into a list, broken across short lines: "I could / help people / and bring them happiness / and take care of them." Each act sits alone, almost like a duty roster. Every item faces outward. The speaker imagines being worth loving by being useful, and nothing in the list is for themselves.

Then the central metaphor turns on the speaker. "But my spring is a little broken, the coils have been twisted." This is the longest line so far, and it sprawls as though the sentence itself has been bent out of shape. The image is well chosen. A real spring pushed or twisted too far may never regain its form, so the damage is to the structure and not just a temporary squeeze. The understatement of "a little" suggests someone used to shrinking their own pain.

The language then slips. Springs don't have a "stance" and they don't "tumble," so the speaker has stopped describing hardware and started describing themselves. "I get back up but my stance is trembling / I shake / I tumble / I break down." Three clipped lines mimic a body going down in stages. "Shake" and "break" also rhyme, and in a poem with no other rhyme at all, that chime lands on the two most painful words. "Break down" works twice over, since machines break down and so do people, and the metaphor lets both meanings stand together.

The most interesting move comes next: "But it does it's best, to get back up." The pronoun shifts from "I" to "it." From this slight distance the speaker finds a kindness they couldn't manage face-on. "Does its best" is what we say to comfort someone else, and here it is quietly turned on the self. The comma before "to get back up" reads like a held breath. The casual spelling of "it's" and the lowercase "i'll" in the final line also give the poem the texture of a voice typed quickly and unpolished, which suits its directness.

The poem also contains a quiet irony. The speaker envies springs that get back up, and then says "I get back up." The phrase returns almost word for word, and the poem never points out the contradiction. It leaves the reader to notice that what the speaker wants is already happening, only without the neat bounce they imagined. Their resilience is trembling and uneven, but it is still resilience.

Structurally, this is free verse with no regular metre or rhyme scheme. Line length does the emotional work. Wishes and collapses come in short, halting fragments, while the explanation of damage runs long. The ending, "So i'll keep going," is flat and unexclaimed. The "So" presents it as a conclusion drawn from "does its best," and it reads as a decision more than a triumph.

The poem's significance lies in that modesty. Judging by its imagery, it speaks about struggling with self-worth, and it refuses the idea that recovery must look graceful. Resilience here is not springing back unharmed but getting up while shaking, again and again. For a young reader, that is a useful and generous redefinition, and the poem makes it in under a hundred words.

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