pRomIsE — Summary

I think I should get a rubber band on my wrist too To stop me from thinking of you Cause after all this time I'm still writing poems about you Still saying I'm in love with you I still have your number on my phone by the way I tried calling the other day THE NUMBER YOU HAVE DIALED DOES NOT EXIST

Which had me thinking for a little bit Maybe the love I seek does not exist

And I guess maybe that's alright Maybe it's about time I gave up the fight I'm way too battered and bruised I missed the opportunity to hold you close Now I'm stuck here missing you And I guess all of this seems like it's coming out the blue And maybe that's true

Cause the words you're reading come straight from my blues

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Nkazimulo's "Promise" is about being unable to let go of someone long after the relationship has ended. The speaker opens by wishing for a rubber band on their wrist, a trick people use to snap themselves out of a habit, because they keep thinking about this person and keep writing poems about them. They even admit they still say they're in love.

The turning point comes with the phone call. The speaker still has the number saved, tries it, and hears a recorded message saying it doesn't exist. That flat, automated voice, set apart in capitals, makes the loss feel final, and it leads the speaker to a darker thought: maybe the kind of love they're looking for doesn't exist either.

The mood is tired and quietly sad. The speaker sounds "battered and bruised," ready to give up, and regretful about a missed chance to hold this person close. The last line explains the whole poem: the words come "straight from my blues," so the sudden confession is really just pain finally spoken aloud.

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