followers of crossed paths — Poem analysis

ononestoContemplative

Every human's dream Is to be the original With no twist of other minds Upon their own style of life But that same human Is the one who follows Paths already crossed By all the other humans Who never met themselves Never knew who they were

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Everyone wants to stand out, and almost no one notices how common that wish is. ononesto builds a ten-line trap around exactly this. The poem begins by granting the dream of originality its full dignity ("Every human's dream / Is to be the original") and then, at the word "But," turns the dream into evidence against the dreamer. The same human, we learn, "follows / Paths already crossed / By all the other humans."

The whole argument is one sentence with no punctuation, and its shape does much of the persuading. Four lines describe the wish and six take it apart. Every line starts with a capital letter, yet there is no full stop anywhere, so the capitals mark the start of lines rather than sentences, and the idea rolls on without giving the reader a moment to object. There is no rhyme and no regular metre. The lines are short, a handful of syllables each, and they sound like someone thinking aloud rather than performing. That plainness suits the content, since the poem states an idea rather than decorating it. Even so, the shortest lines carry the heaviest claims: "Paths already crossed" is tiny, yet it holds the whole verdict.

A few words repay slow reading. "Original" hides "origin." To be an original is to be a source, the first to walk somewhere, and the poem's complaint is that no one gets to be that. "Twist" is a slightly odd, interesting choice. A twist can be a strand wound into a rope or a bend in a road, so the dreamer wants a life with none of anyone else's turns in it. "Style of life" sounds like something picked from a catalogue, which suggests (this is an inference) that the dream may be about looking different rather than being different. Notice, too, that the poem says "human" three times and never "people" or "we." The word keeps the speaker at a cool distance, like an observer outside the species. The singular "Every human" also slides into the plural "their own," as if one individual could not be separated from the crowd.

The title, "followers of crossed paths," holds the poem's one image. Everything else is abstract, but the path we can picture, a track worn flat by earlier feet. "Crossed paths" also has an everyday meaning, since to cross paths with someone is to meet them, and the final lines lean on that. The walkers ahead of us have crossed everyone's paths, yet "never met themselves." The closing line, "Never knew who they were," is built from short, flat words and falls away on purpose. Its past tense matters too: those earlier walkers are gone, and their identities went with them.

That ending quietly closes a logical loop. If the people whose paths we follow never knew themselves, they were probably following paths as well, and so on backward, with no first walker in sight. The original everyone dreams of being appears nowhere in the poem. Listen also to the negatives. The dream is defined by absence ("With no twist of other minds") and so is the failure ("never met," "Never knew"). The wish to have nothing borrowed ends in having nothing known.

The poem never names a cure, but it points toward one. If the trouble is that people "never met themselves," then originality would come not from dodging other minds but from self-knowledge. The text suggests this reading rather than stating it. The poem also exempts no one, because "Every human" includes the reader. The fear of being a copy is one most of us recognise, and the poem's sharp little point is that this fear is itself one of the most widely shared things there is.

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