Reticent Star — Summary

A lone star shines bright in the sky. It reminds me of you, actually. A bright light in the endless abyss. A sole hope against the dark ceiling above.

My Reticent star, you are the only one for me. You do not see yourself as I see you. A hot mess, a tangle of toxicity and flame. But that is not what you are to me.

As my eyes adjust to the night, as the clouds move away, I see the other stars. Not as bright. Not as beautiful. They mean nothing to me. There is no star to surpass you. I deserve better, you say, but where? I see no equal.

I focus my eyes back on you, my bright, beautiful, shining star. I gaze upon your glory. I blink, and you blink back. You. Blink back at me. Something is amiss... I know. I know what you are now.

A fucking airplane. A god damned. Motherfucking. Airplane.

Why must you ruin my metaphors? Bitch, get the fuck out. Let a real star take your place. Honestly. The fucking nerve.

A lone airplane shines bright in the sky. Despite it not being an adequate representation of your beauty, It still reminded me of you, my Reticent star.

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The poem begins as a tender love poem. The speaker stares at a lone star and sees the person they adore: bright, singular, a hope in the dark. They admit this person can be "a hot mess" full of toxicity and flame, but insist that's not how they see them. Other stars appear as the clouds clear, and the speaker dismisses them all. Nobody compares.

Then the star blinks back, and the spell breaks. It's an airplane. The tone swings from romantic to furious, with a burst of swearing and a comic complaint that the airplane has ruined the metaphor. The speaker even tells it to get out and let a real star take its place.

The ending softens, though. The airplane isn't a good stand-in for the loved one's beauty, but it still reminds the speaker of them. The mood is funny and self-aware, but the affection stays real. The joke is partly on the speaker, who can't stop loving the thing that isn't quite what they thought.

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