First Untethered Space Walk February 3, 1984 — Summary

Ruth JewellInspired

He floats free suspended above the Earth balanced between the Dark above the blue below

He sits in the hand of the universe weightless as a feather on the breath of heaven

A billion voices lie below but here his breathing is the only earthbound sound

The universe sweeps around him with the sounds of atoms stars galaxies in wavelengths he is not tuned to.

Someday we all will hear the birth and death of stars of galaxies colliding and maybe just maybe the voice born on another planet

But today only he floats, suspended between the light and dark of the universe the first of many who follow

Courage took the first step hope floated out into tomorrow Astronaut Bruce McCandless was the first he wasn’t the last

Now the real work begins

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Ruth Jewell's poem pictures an astronaut drifting alone above the Earth, and the title names the moment as a first untethered space walk. The poem names Bruce McCandless near the end as the one who went first. The opening lines hold him in a kind of balance, with darkness above and blue below, and the image of him resting "in the hand of the universe" makes him seem both tiny and safe. Her comparison to a feather on "the breath of heaven" adds to that gentle, almost prayerful feeling.

The speaker feels wonder and quiet pride. Below him are a billion voices, yet the only sound he hears is his own breathing, which stresses how isolated he is. The universe hums with atoms, stars and galaxies he can't yet hear, and the speaker imagines a future when we all will. The mood is hushed and hopeful, and the last line, "Now the real work begins," shifts from awe to the sense that this courageous step is only a start.

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