In Immemorial Elms [Dialogue] — Summary

SkapandeContemplative

Wouldn't it be funny If the stars in their black beyond were hung from the ceiling by fishing line Just painted white cardboard, hollow - but shine Regardless of the opinions of the earth And mine are absent regardless.

If you want to hide yourself among them, you may You may find your way across the creaking floorboards Of the black beyond, to the vast array And sit yourself among the countless separatist lords And in this I could take comfort.

But perhaps I am content In finding myself in the multitude of their dim vassals Some natural spirit lacking velvet, bells, and tassels Wrapped gently by the veiling morning mist In the fields long below.

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The speaker starts with a playful, slightly unsettling thought: what if the stars were just white cardboard hung on fishing line, hollow but still shining? Their glow doesn't depend on what anyone on earth thinks, and the speaker's opinions don't count for much either.

Then the poem turns to an invitation. Someone could climb up and sit among the stars, which are imagined as proud, independent "lords," and the speaker says there might be comfort in that. But the final stanza chooses something humbler. The speaker would rather be one of the stars' dim followers, a natural spirit without any fancy trimmings, resting in morning mist in the fields far below. The mood is wistful and gently ironic. Grandeur may be fake, the speaker suggests, while a quiet, ordinary place on the ground feels honest and peaceful. The ending settles into contentment rather than longing.

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