The Winter Dream — Summary

Snow falling lightly, Getting entangled in your hair. Your perfume, sweet and candy-like, Wafting in the breeze. The wind comes up. You shiver, huddling closer. You shiver again, I open my jacket invitingly. You're warm. Your heart beats gaining, Your checks turn red, Your hazel eyes grow big. My hands wrap around you, Protecting you from an unseen force. You gaze up at me, I gaze back. You start laughing, Slowly first, then gaining. I join in. We stand there, Snow falling, Laughing, gazing. I lean in, You follow. Our lips brush. I slowly arise from my dream, Like a Phoenix rising. I gaze around, vision hazy. The board, Graffitied by words. A voice asks something, frustrated. I reply, before gathering my things. As I walk out, Our eyes meet. Hazel in blue. It holds, Something passes, Then it's gone. I exit with curiosity. Could she? Why would she? I think as my mind returns, To a Winter Dream.

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The first part of the poem is a daydream, and a tender one. Snow drifts down, a girl shivers, and the speaker opens his jacket and holds her. They laugh, look at each other, and finally kiss. Details like her candy-sweet perfume and hazel eyes make the scene feel close and real.

Then he "rises" from it, like a phoenix, and we learn he has been zoning out in a classroom. A frustrated voice asks him something, he answers, and he gathers his things. On the way out, he meets the eyes of a girl whose are hazel, which suggests she is the one from the dream. For a moment something seems to pass between them.

The mood moves from warm and romantic to hazy and then quietly hopeful. The speaker feels longing, nervousness, and curiosity. His last questions, "Could she? Why would she?", show he can't tell whether she feels anything too, so he drifts back into the dream.

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