A Wish — Summary

Oh, how I wish (Though I really shouldn't wish, because look where wishing has gotten me) I wish you were mine I wish I was yours I wish you would ask me to Homecoming I wish you would dance with me And tell me I look pretty I wish I could look at you Without blushing with regret I wish I could talk to you Without feeling shy and strange I wish you were mine Because you just looked so wonderful In your heather-grey t-shirt It just isn't fair And your green but kinda blue eyes Were looking right at me It just wasn't fair. I just wanted to hold you and tell you I wanted to tell you everything But it wasn't right I wasn't right (Though I'm never quite right around you) I think you like me too You're either too shy Or you've long since though this through Both make my stomach sink But I think the latter is much worse No The former (How could I decide?) I wonder If you even like me at all I wonder if you know How special you are I wonder if you know That a girl is writing for you Sweet nothings and wishes And blushes on paper I wonder if I could stop these damn wishes Get over you And get on with my life I wonder I wish

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A girl is caught in an ache of unspoken longing for someone she can't quite talk to. Almost every line begins with "I wish," and the repetition makes the poem feel like a loop she can't get out of. Her wishes are small and specific: to be asked to Homecoming, to dance, to be told she looks pretty. Small details, like the grey t-shirt and the "green but kinda blue" eyes, show how closely she has been watching him.

The mood is tender, shy, and a little frustrated. She thinks he likes her too, but she can't tell whether he's timid or has simply decided against her, and she flips between the two possibilities mid-sentence. The parentheses read like nervous second thoughts she can't help saying aloud. By the end, "I wonder" and "I wish" blur together. She wants to get over him, but the poem suggests she hasn't managed it yet.

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