The Windowless Bus — Summary

David John ScanlonContemplative

We met on the bus travelling here But never arrived the same at our place.

In our moments of resolute pride The windows shattered from seeing better And a new view was fore-ever present In our making: a creation without barriers.

The driver of the bus turned around But the face was too distant to make out. Walking down past the passengers, Chit-chatting about the everyday things,

A hopefulness of directions possibility Came as the driver turned to look ahead.

Banging on the window, hoping to see The road ahead through the drivers eyes. The driver turned and I saw myself.

Awe stuck I turned again to speak to you

Of the surprise only to hear you

Living again amongst the everyday words.

You kindly welcomed me to my seat.

With that smile you brought me to speak. The words that came did not talk Of windows and drivers but of things.

The windows were back but open Half-hiding the world as it passed by.

As we descended from that bus I looked back again, I was driving again As the windowless bus disappeared.

I try to talk of what I have seen in words But few appear to travel to this place And understand the symbols before us.

As we walked along you spoke again.

You talked of the window-less bus and Of the the face you saw in the drivers face.

It was in that moment that I realised That being alone in the world of seeing Is a lonely place: I feel better now in sharing.

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Scanlon's poem uses a bus journey as a picture of seeing the world differently and then trying to explain it to someone else. The windowless bus suggests a view with nothing in the way: the windows shatter, and the speaker feels free to create. When the speaker bangs on the glass hoping to see through the driver's eyes, the driver turns and turns out to be the speaker. That moment reads as a kind of self-recognition, as if the person steering the experience has been them all along.

After that, the mood shifts from wonder to uncertainty. The windows come back, "half-hiding the world," and the speaker finds that ordinary words can't carry what they have seen. The ending is quietly warm. The companion describes seeing the same face in the driver, and the speaker realises that being alone with such vision is lonely. Sharing it brings relief, and the poem closes on a note of connection.

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