Young/Old — Summary

Jason RidpathContemplative

Stars are reflective. Scars getting infected. Stories being dissected. Ready for another dose? Life being young.

Scared of the next rung. Life being old.

Waiting to collect gold.

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Youth and old age are set side by side here, and neither comes out simple. The opening lines lean on sound: "stars," "scars," "stories" slide into one another, and the images turn from something bright and reflective to something wounded and infected. Even stories are "dissected," picked apart rather than simply told. The question "Ready for another dose?" sounds a little weary, as if experience keeps arriving whether you want it or not.

Being young, the speaker suggests, means being "scared of the next rung," always climbing and unsure of what comes next. Being old is quieter and more patient: "waiting to collect gold." The gold could mean wisdom, reward, or simply the end of the climb, and the poem leaves that open. The short, clipped lines give the mood a restless, slightly wry edge. It feels like youth is anxious, age is expectant, and both are shaped by the wounds along the way.

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