The Notes We Left — Summary

the acrid smell of burning plastic from the faulty wire in the fridge was mostly gone when we came back to pack up whatever we could move in my corolla and my father’s kia sedona

the landlord had left an angry note on the door and piss on the toilet seat we packed pots pans the printer clothes whatever we knew we would need

the fridge had started to smell of hot coolant and we didn’t open it knowing there were rotten eggs inside on the front my spouse wrote in sharpie that the fire department told us it should not be plugged in

he couldn’t stop writing on the windows he wrote that the landlord should replace the glass that was broken before we moved in over a year before and above a hole in the floor added that he should fix that too he even left a post-it on the toilet a friendly reminder to clean it up

and leaving the furniture we could not move we fled that place one last time drove off up route two and four ninety-five away from fitchburg and the lingering acrid smell

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The speaker and their spouse return to a rented home after a fire has made it unlivable, and the poem follows them as they pack what they can into two cars and leave for good. The details are small and unglamorous: the smell of burning plastic, the rotten eggs in the fridge, the pots, pans and printer. Nothing is dramatic, and that plainness is part of the effect.

The most striking thing is the spouse's compulsion to keep writing notes. On the fridge, the windows, even a post-it on the toilet, he lists what the landlord should fix or clean. The poem suggests this is a way of getting some control and having the last word after losing a home. The speaker mostly watches, tired and quietly resigned, and the flat tone hides anger and grief. The mood is weary and bitter, with a little dark humor in the "friendly reminder." The ending, driving away with the smell still lingering, suggests the damage won't be left behind so easily.

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