Dear Television — Poem analysis

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What has happened in the world lately? Should i be totally upset or calm and sedately?

Tell me who should I hate today? With who I am allowed to play?

What should I be afraid of this week? About what fears I am allowed to speak?

And what should I buy tomorrow? Where can I get some cash to borrow?

I'm so grateful for your great advice. I can even book a flight to paradise. All I have to do is make you my king. And for that you promise me everything.

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Nobody in this poem is forced to do anything, and that is the unsettling part. The speaker writes a polite letter, "Dear Television", with the warmth of a thank-you note. Into it goes the most private material of a life: what to feel, whom to dislike, what to fear, what to buy. By the last line the screen has been crowned. The central idea is that control doesn't always arrive as force. It can be invited in, thanked, and made king.

The structure carries this argument. The first eight lines are all questions, and the last four are all statements. The questioning mind simply stops. In the second line, feelings are offered like two settings on a dial: "totally upset or calm and sedately." The grammar wobbles here, since "calm" is an adjective and "sedately" an adverb, as if the rhyme with "lately" were dragging the sentence along. The lowercase "i" in that same line may be an accident, but it suits a speaker who is already shrinking.

The language of permission is what really gives the speaker away. Twice we hear "allowed": "With who I am allowed to play?" and "About what fears I am allowed to speak?" The word "play" is childlike, and the speaker sounds like a child asking a parent which friends are acceptable. The second question goes further. It isn't enough to be told what to fear, because even speaking about fear needs approval. The time markers, "today," "this week," "tomorrow," read like a programme schedule. Hatred and fear become items in a rotating line-up, each replaced when the next episode arrives.

The money couplet may be the sharpest. "What should I buy tomorrow? / Where can I get some cash to borrow?" The rhyme of "tomorrow" and "borrow" quietly states a whole economy. Desire is created first, and debt follows. The speaker never asks whether to buy, only what, and never whether he can afford it, only where to borrow. Then "paradise" arrives as something you can "book," a flight on credit. The rhyme of "advice" with "paradise" is not quite perfect, since one ends in an s sound and the other in a z. It is a tiny flaw, but it fits a promise that doesn't quite deliver.

Then the tone flips. "I'm so grateful for your great advice" is the speaker's only line of gratitude, and the poem lets it hang there, ironic and hollow. Notice too that Television never speaks. The speaker answers on its behalf, which suggests the voice has already moved inside his head. "All I have to do is make you my king" sounds like the breezy small print of an advertisement, as though total loyalty were a minor step. In return, "you promise me everything." After eight precise questions, "everything" is the vaguest word possible, a promise never itemised. The closing rhyme, "king" and "everything," ends on a weak, trailing syllable, as if the promise can't land anywhere solid. The word "king" makes the choice political. The speaker is not conquered but chooses a ruler, and the judgment of that choice is left to the reader. The tempter-style bargain, loyalty in exchange for everything, is an inference from the lines, but the shape is hard to miss.

The form copies what it criticises. Short rhymed couplets with a bouncy, sing-song rhythm sound like a jingle or a slogan, easy to remember and easy to repeat. The poem is catchy about a mind that has stopped thinking, and that is part of its cleverness. A heavier, more argumentative style would have fought the screen on its own terms, whereas here the screen's own music is turned against it.

That is why the poem matters, and why it still reads as current. "Television" can stand for any screen that feeds us opinions, outrage and shopping lists in the same breath. The poem doesn't need a villain or a dramatic scene. It only needs a speaker who has forgotten that the questions were once his own. The uncomfortable point is how reasonable each question sounds on its own, and how little it takes to give them all away.

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