Moral Dilemmas 2 — Poem analysis

Mike StoneContemplative

I can't kill you.

If I can't kill them, then who can I kill?

If it's wrong to kill, is it ever right to kill?

Where is the line drawn?

Between them and us?

Between humans and animals?

Between conscious animals and unconscious animals?

Between animals and plants?

Can I kill something that is not living?

Yes. It is called destruction.

If it's wrong to destroy, is it ever right to destroy?

Where is the line drawn?

Between a work of art and something useful?

Between something useful and something useless?

Your world or someone else's?

A distant star?

A grain of sand?

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Four words open the poem: "I can't kill you." It could be tenderness or restraint, and we never learn who "you" is. What matters is what happens next. Instead of resting in that refusal, the speaker pushes on it: "If I can't kill them, then who can I kill?" The grammar of a decent impulse turns, unsettlingly, into the grammar of a hunt. The poem is about how quickly a personal moral instinct falls apart once you try to turn it into a rule.

The structure is a ladder of questions. After "Where is the line drawn?" come pairings, each wider or stranger than the last: "Between them and us?" "Between humans and animals?" "Between conscious animals and unconscious animals?" "Between animals and plants?" The reasoning moves from the human world to the edge of what counts as alive. The phrase "conscious animals and unconscious animals" is a little clumsy, and that reads as deliberate: the speaker is reaching for a distinction that language does not supply cleanly. Then the ladder runs out of rungs: "Can I kill something that is not living?" The question is almost a joke, since killing seems to require life. The reply is the only thing in the poem that sounds like a ruling: "Yes. It is called destruction." Look at what that answer actually does. It settles nothing and simply changes the word. "Kill" carries guilt, while "destruction" sounds administrative, almost neutral. The poem shows how vocabulary can move a problem into a different drawer without solving it.

The second half repeats the first like a template. "If it's wrong to kill, is it ever right to kill?" becomes "If it's wrong to destroy, is it ever right to destroy?", and "Where is the line drawn?" returns word for word. The effect is of a machine running the same argument on new material, and it suggests the first pass taught the speaker nothing. Yet the boundaries have changed: "a work of art and something useful," then "something useful and something useless." Value has replaced life as the thing being measured. Worth, the poem hints, is as slippery as consciousness.

The ending is the most interesting part. "Your world or someone else's?" brings back the "you" of the opening line. Now it is no longer a person to be spared but a whole world that belongs to someone. Then come two images: "A distant star? A grain of sand?" The pair swings between the vastest and the tiniest things imaginable. Neither is alive, neither is obviously useful, and neither gets a verdict. The poem stops on the smallest object and a question mark, leaving a hush instead of an answer.

The form carries much of this meaning. The poem is free verse, with no rhyme and no regular meter, and nearly every line is its own stanza. That makes the white space do real work. Each gap works like a line drawn across the page, and the reader crosses a boundary to get from one question to the next. Almost every sentence is a question, so the rhythm is a repeated rising inflection, interrupted only by flat declaratives like "I can't kill you" and "Yes. It is called destruction," which land like stones. The vocabulary is bare, built from short words such as "kill," "line," "who" and "where." Metaphor is almost absent. The concrete nouns, "art," "star" and "sand," arrive only at the very end, so the abstract argument is suddenly given something to look at.

What makes the poem worth reading is that it refuses to tell you what to think. It shows where thinking about ethics tends to break. Most of us hold firm rules, such as not killing, and rarely test where their edges lie. By stepping through each edge in turn, the poem makes us feel that every boundary is drawn by people, not found in nature. The numeral in the title suggests one in a run of such exercises, though the poem stands well alone. For a student reader, its real invitation is to answer the questions, and then to notice how uncomfortable it is when the answers will not stay put.

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