Altered Granite — Summary

A polished stone Pink and green Like unakite But born from fantasy Sits on the floor Of a kitchen cluttered By an ugly table, two unrelated chairs A man appears unexpectedly Crouched upon the table Rain coat spread out like bat wings He jumps He pounces Upon the huge, fake stone And is seen outside

They roll together as unlikely twins Downhill

The man rests In a headshot Vinegar and baking soda Foaming from behind his head But then over his face Making him a human volcano Blissed out and smiling Whites of the eyes not looking

A three year old boy in a suit Stands as eyewitness while

A handheld CB radio

Asks that he respond

But the boy does not

And the clock nailed into his back Ticks

And ticks And ticks

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Reading this feels like being dropped into someone else's dream, where logic loosens and strange images follow one another without explanation. A fake pink-and-green stone sits in a cluttered kitchen. A man in a raincoat appears on the table, leaps onto it, and the two tumble downhill outside like "unlikely twins." Then he becomes a "human volcano," foaming like a science-fair experiment, blissed out and blank-eyed.

The poem's weight shifts at the end. A three-year-old boy in a suit watches as a CB radio calls for him to answer. He stays silent, and a clock nailed into his back keeps ticking. The poem never explains these images, so the meaning is up to the reader. Still, the speaker seems to observe rather than judge, and the mood moves from absurd and playful to uneasy. The boy's silence and the repeated "ticks" suggest something about time, childhood, or pressure that cannot be escaped.

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