The Offerings — Summary

Orrin SchwabCheerful

so the sky opened and the streets filled with empty cans and papers leaflets and videotapes old radio songs drifted downward and photographs of the dead and antique toys and old almanacs piled together in the alleys and on the sidewalks

and people drove by in their late model cars and ogled at the vintage debris that had fallen thousands of tons

sleek aerodynamic sport cars white, red and metallic blue opened their low trunks and deposited the old song books and calendars, baseball cards and am radios and tweed coats all carefully folded into trunks of slim cars with slim, clear skinned drivers, male and female with dark glasses

and the air was cool the sky cloudless the sun distant and the streets cleaned of junk piled into rows

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Orrin Schwab imagines a strange event: the sky opens and drops thousands of tons of old things onto the streets, including cans, leaflets, videotapes, old songs, photographs of the dead, antique toys. What stands out is how ordinary the response is. Nobody panics or mourns. People in sleek sports cars slow down to look, then neatly fold coats and stack song books and baseball cards into their trunks, as if tidying up were the only sensible reaction.

The speaker never says what he feels, and that flat, reporting tone is the point. The poem seems to suggest that a modern, polished world handles the past by storing it away, not by facing it. The drivers are "slim, clear skinned" and hidden behind dark glasses, which makes them seem distant and unreachable. By the end the streets are clean, the sky is cloudless, and the sun is "distant." The mood is cool, calm, and a little eerie, a quiet picture of memory being packed up and forgotten.

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