Walking — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

I walk with my watch in my hand to see the distances with minutes

to run is to save nothing wind blowing into the forest a few pigeons

walking I find my body where it is all stomach and no sense of the word fat

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The speaker goes for a walk with a watch in hand, measuring distances in minutes rather than miles. It's an odd, quietly funny image: someone checking the clock, yet clearly not in a hurry. The second stanza makes that plain. Running, the speaker says, "saves nothing," so there's no point rushing. Instead the poem slows down to notice small things: wind moving into the forest, a few pigeons.

The last lines turn inward. Walking, the speaker finds the body "where it is," which suggests simply being present in it, without judgment. The body is "all stomach," a blunt, almost comic phrase, but with "no sense of the word fat." The usual shame or self-criticism drops away, and the body is just a body.

The mood is calm, plain, and gently humorous. Nothing dramatic happens, and that's the point: walking becomes a way to settle into time, place, and oneself.

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