Scissor, Paper — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

It started with angels: a chain gang, joined at the wings. Or children holding hands, their blank faces & androgynous bodies ready for the magic of markers. Seven to eight, it seems, was the Age of Paper. In the lunchroom, older boys passed on the lore of cootie catchers & diamond-shaped footballs folded from a notebook page. Back in class, we made snowflakes & taped them to the high classroom windows, bait for the gods of snow & early dismissal. In December, we draped the blackboard & doorway with Christmas chains, red linked with green linked with red, & come February, learned the simplest cut of all: the craft-paper heart. This time, though green might’ve seemed more apt, only red would do. The teacher showed us how to turn them into cards with the addition of a recipient’s name on the outside & some simple message hidden in the fold, making a virtue of the necessary, indelible crease.

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A school year told entirely in paper: that is the poem's plan, and it moves through the calendar as a child would, by what was being made. First come the paper angels and children in chains, then the lunchroom folding crazes, the December snowflakes, the Christmas garlands, and finally the February heart. For most of its length it reads as a fond, funny inventory of classroom crafts. Only in the last few lines does it turn, and the turn is what makes the whole list matter.

The form suits the subject. There is no rhyme and no regular meter, just short free-verse lines, some only two or three words long, so the poem looks like a narrow strip of paper running down the page. The sentences are loose and conversational, and the line breaks do small, deliberate work. "Joined / at the wings" lets the word "joined" hang for a moment before the wings arrive, and "taped them to the high / classroom windows" stretches the line upward the way a child's arm must stretch. The ampersands, in "cootie catchers / & diamond-shaped / footballs", keep the voice casual and quick, like a list scribbled in a margin.

Much of the humor comes from the vocabulary. Bonta describes childhood scraps in mythic terms: "the Age of Paper," as if it were a historical epoch, and "lore" handed down by older boys, as if the cootie catcher were a sacred text. The snowflakes are "bait for the gods of snow / & early dismissal," which is exactly how a seven-year-old thinks about weather and bargaining. The hedge in "it seems" shows the adult narrator reaching back through a haze, unsure of the exact year but sure of the feeling.

The first image is the strangest: "a chain gang" of angels. Prison labor and heavenly beings sit oddly together, and the phrase captures how a row of identical cut-out figures looks both festive and faintly regimented. These figures have "blank faces / & androgynous bodies / ready for the magic / of markers." The blankness describes the children too, who are waiting to be drawn in, to become particular. That is the quiet movement underneath the list. Angels, snowflakes and Christmas chains are all group objects: "red linked with green / linked with red," one link much like another. The heart is the first craft that is addressed to one person, with "a recipient's name / on the outside."

The color detail matters here. Green "might've seemed more apt," perhaps because green suggests growth and the approach of spring, but "only red would do." Nobody explains why. The convention simply wins, the way it does in a classroom, and the poem lets us feel how children absorb the rules of feeling before they understand them. The teacher's instructions are almost comically plain: a name outside, "some simple message / hidden in the fold."

That last phrase leads to the closing line, which twists the old saying about making a virtue of necessity into "making / a virtue of the necessary, / indelible crease." A card cannot exist without a fold, and a fold cannot be undone; flatten the paper and the line remains. The craft lesson becomes a lesson about intimacy. To say something tender and private, you have to bend yourself, and the bend leaves a permanent mark. The word "indelible" sounds almost too heavy for a paper craft, which is the point. It suggests that these small classroom rituals left something lasting.

The title adds to this. "Scissor, Paper" calls to mind the children's hand game, but one word is missing. Whether the absent "rock" is deliberate is only a guess, though it fits: the poem has no hard, stony thing in it. It is all cutting and folding, soft materials that still manage to leave their mark.

The poem is significant because it takes something easy to dismiss, a nostalgic list of school crafts, and shows it doing serious emotional teaching. It never says "love" or "memory." It trusts the paper, the red, and the crease to carry the meaning, and the ending rewards a second reading.

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